Sunday, 5 March 2017

DPS feedback

From the feedback i got, i was told that layout was a serious problem and that the text was hard to read. I must go back and make my text more readable and sort out my layout

Survey

Changes over time

Overtime my products have changed quite a bit as more and more improvements have been made.
Front Cover 
With my front cover, my masthead, and dominant image stayed the same. Everything else had changed however. I used to have more sell lines dotted across the page. However, to make the front cover more neat, and so the dominant image had more space, i removed most of the sell lines and only used three in the style of xxl. I replaced the main sell line many times, one time having a banner over it to make it stand out. Eventually i moved the main sell line over the dark dominant image and made it white. This made it more noticeable.
Contents Page 
My contents page mostly stayed the same. However, i challenged the normal codes and conventions by including a sub image relating to the dps. This is usually reserved for an editors note in a mature magazine like mine. I did this so i had my 4 original images. Also while i had contents for most articles, i didn't have one for my dps so i included that next to my dominant image.
DPS 
I had to completely redesign my dps. Originally i had two images on both pages. The background was dark to white, which made text hard to read. Overall it was a failure. In my redesign, I had one dominant image which dominated the left side of my dps. I had a pull quote included with a strapline underneath. I even added website details and photography credits

Friday, 3 March 2017

Deconstructions Reflection

Through my deconstructions and the feedback i received off it, i have discovered insight on making the magazine and what to do with it. I have learned more on photoshop and i have decided to practice more on it. From feedback received, i have learned that i must use more color. Also my magazine apparently does not have good structure. I must look at other magazines and learn their structure to recieve better responses.

Monday, 30 January 2017

Friday 27th January 2017

AIM
I have still yet to finish question 1 at home since the files on my flash drive got corrupted, so question 1 needs to be done today.
Reflection
I finally finished question 1, however it took all lesson, to beat the deadline, all questions need to be done over the weekend

Wednesday 25th January 2017

AIM
I began question 1 at home so I hope I can complete it today or at least get most of it done
Reflection
Question 1 is bigger than I thought, it will need some time at home and Fridays lesson to complete

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Question 5

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Question 3

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Question 1

Friday, 20 January 2017

Friday 20th January 2017

AIM
i want my front cover contents page and dps finally finished
Reflection
I have finished all three again, i can only hope this is the last submission so my evaluation can begin

Wednesday 18th January 2017

AIM
I want to start my evaluation so it is finished by next week.
Reflection
I was given feedback on my Front cover, contents page and DPS. i must improve them one last time so i can start my evaluation

Friday, 13 January 2017

Friday 13th January 2017

Aim
i want to finally finish my dps and get started on my evaluation
Reflection
I finally finished and printed my dps. However, i did no have time to start my evaluation. next time i hope to start my evaluation.

Wednesday 11th January 2017

AIM
i want to finally solve my magazine problem once and for all
Reflection
i am now aware of the fact that i must do an evaluation before January 21st. However i did fix my Front cover and contents page. My goal now is to finally fix my dps and get started on my evaluation.

Friday 6th January 2017

Aim
i want to make a plan on how my new dps will look and how to fix it.
Reflection
i know how to improve my dps, and that involves going back to my contents page aswell. I now aim to change all three of my projects

Wednesday 4th January 2017

AIM
i want to get feedback from my dps so i know how to improve it
Reflection
I need to completely revamp my dps and make improvements to my front cover aswell

Wednesday, 11 January 2017

Front Cover Rationale

december work calendar

Wednesday 14th December 2016

AIM
I aim to complete work on my front cover while also updating my blog
Reflection
I have managed to improve my front cover and my blog should now be up to date

Friday 9th December

AIM
i want to work on everything i have done on photoshop prior to the dos. This includes the front cover and contents page.
Reflection
I have done improvements on my front cover based on feedback from my teacher. I aim to get more feedback so i don't have to repeat it.